I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Tuesday, 2 July 2013

Jack and Jill's not so favourite day.

The sun was right up in the sky, the sun was shinning  over most everything like a cloud of light,including two kids running up a hill that was as steep as a sky scraper.There names were Jack and Jill were just walking up the same old hill and same old water well, but today it was different because it had recently been pouring down with rain in morning so there was a lot of puddles around so they watched where they stepped,But as soon as they got up there Jill slipped in a puddle which knocked Jack over and they both came tumbling down......

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