I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Tuesday, 12 March 2013

Guess what animal it is

Its fur white as snow
As visous a tiger 
Lives in a place as cold as ice
The nose of a blood hound
Swins as fast as a fish
Its claws are as sharp as razors
 and Jaws as strong as a shark
Guess what animal it is?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ethan
    Fantastic idea to use similes to get people to guess that animal you are describing. I guessed a polar bear. Am I right?



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